Expository Speech on umpires

[Rulekeep]

kay guys I'm giving this speech tomorrow and it's only five minutes long. The editing chat is up and live if you guys wanna chime in.

[stevis]

kay guys I'm giving this speech tomorrow and it's only five minutes long. The editing chat is up and live if you guys wanna chime in.

Ok I finally added some comments.   If it needs lengthening, expand on the local part--the next to last graph about working local, amateur ball.  Add your personal experiences/anecdotes!  Those should come off with more passion (because they're personal to you) and make the speech less dry.  (Not that it dry, necessary, but let's face it--you're in a class of kids all doing this right?  you're going to get bored of each other quickly).

[Rulekeep]

kay guys I'm giving this speech tomorrow and it's only five minutes long. The editing chat is up and live if you guys wanna chime in.

Ok I finally added some comments. If it needs lengthening, expand on the local part--the next to last graph about working local, amateur ball. Add your personal experiences/anecdotes! Those should come off with more passion (because they're personal to you) and make the speech less dry. (Not that it dry, necessary, but let's face it--you're in a class of kids all doing this right? you're going to get bored of each other quickly). It's not a class. I'm doing this for the glory of my school.

[Ros@]

May I ask how it went down?

Did you make the 8-10 minutes?

Grz,

Ros@

[Rulekeep]

May I ask how it went down?

Did you make the 8-10 minutes?

Grz,

Ros@

Badly.

No.